The line graph illustrates the amount of money which is received by rice exports from Thailand and Vietnam during the period from 2012 to 2015.
It is evident that the prices of rice exports decreased tremendously from 2012 to 2015. Meanwhile, the cost remained stable among months from January to December in many years, apart from the year of 2013.
Starting at $350 in January, the prices of rice exports in 2012 increased slightly to about $390 before leveling off at around $330 over the period between March and December. While the figure for 2013 rose from $300 in January to approximately $340 in the next month, this number fell significantly to the bottom of about $170 in April. There was a minimal growth of $200 in the final year.
In contrast, the statistics on the prices of rice exports in 2014 and 2015 were much lower than those of previous years. 2014 saw a neglectable reduction from $150 in the initial month to $100 at the end of the month. However, there was a small escalation in the costs of rice exports from $50 in January to around $100 in December.
The line graph illustrates the amount of money which is received by rice exports from Thailand and Vietnam during the period from 2012 to 2015.
It is evident that the prices of rice exports decreased tremendously from 2012 to 2015. Meanwhile, the cost remained stable among months from January to December in many years, apart from the year of 2013.
Starting at $350 in January, the prices of rice exports in 2012 increased slightly to about $390 before leveling off at around $330 over the period between March and December. While the figure for 2013 rose from $300 in January to approximately $340 in the next month, this number fell significantly to the bottom of about $170 in April. There was a minimal growth of $200 in the final year.
In contrast, the statistics on the prices of rice exports in 2014 and 2015 were much lower than those of previous years. 2014 saw a neglectable reduction from $150 in the initial month to $100 at the end of the month. However, there was a small escalation in the costs of rice exports from $50 in January to around $100 in December.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, apart from, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.546875 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47692804216 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5671648952 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.557610899547 0.215688989381 259% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256119672563 0.103423049105 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.267986349582 0.0843802449381 318% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.421304797376 0.15604864568 270% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258869704622 0.0819641961636 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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