The line graph shows the channel one news viewing figures per day on one year.
The line graph depicts the daily viewing news information of channel one on one year.
The most striking feature to be observed is that the highest viewers like to watch program at 6pm compare to other timings.
It can be vividly seen that from January to may, the viewers of 9:30 pm news upsurged slightly. Further it plunged from may to August. After that it elevated and 3 million viewers watched news per day in December. From may to August, the viewers of 11:30 news followed an increasing trend rising from 0 to 4 million viewers per day.Further it declined slowly from September to December.
Turning to rest of description, the figure of 6 pm news viewers was 5 million per day in January but it curtailed remarkably and 4 million viewers watch news in December. As far as comparison is concerned, the viewers of 1 pm news remained constant from all the months compare to other timings. Moreover, the viewers of 6 pm and 9:30 pm was almost same in the month of December compare to other timings.
- some people think that subjects tough in school are a waste of time, while others disagree and believe that this type of education is useful for students. discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Nowadays many people become popular by being featured online or appearing on TV. is it a positive or negative trend in your society? Give reasons for your answer and include example from experience. 66
- the line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. 61
- some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic World. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. 61
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individual and teams is the reason for most sport achievements. Others think that mental attitude is more important. discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65921787709 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5797113977 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519553072626 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6095530937 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234219761511 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117943542407 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177627298684 0.0843802449381 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197577897488 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231428066271 0.0819641961636 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.