The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of dirhams

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The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of dirhams.

In 2002, Dubai had an approximate cost of gold which is illustrated from January to December and it accounted for millions of dirham.

Overall, the sales of gold were at a peak point in March however cost dropped in December. Moreover, the estimated similar cost of gold fell in July as well as in September.

In the first month of the 2002 year, it stood at 200 millions of dirham and slightly increased in February around 225 millions of dirham. Afterward, it reached at a peak which was at 350 million dirhams in March and it was the highest upward trend comparatively than over a period of time. Nevertheless, the cost of gold gradually decreased up to July that reached the smallest amount just over 100 million of dirhams.

Furthermore, it was significantly increased after July and it was account at same as the first month of January by 200 millions of dirham. However, again it plummeted in September as before in July with little estimation. Finally, sales of gold steadily surged nearly 200 million of dirham when it was over the last two months in 2002 in Dubai.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
...rst month of the 2002 year, it stood at 200 millions of dirham and slightly increased in Februa...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '225 million'.
Suggestion: 225 million
...d slightly increased in February around 225 millions of dirham. Afterward, it reached at a peak...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... upward trend comparatively than over a period of time. Nevertheless, the cost of gold gradual...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
...t same as the first month of January by 200 millions of dirham. However, again it plummeted in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73544973545 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68215874485 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8705289424 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32085203471 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139244022973 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994628410794 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203618005859 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515811696565 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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