The line below illustrates information about trips in-and-out the UK during 20 years period between 1979 and 1999, and bar chart reveals the most famous parts of the world by British people.
In general, in first 7 years, the difference between the number of visitors to and from the UK is not high, however in the rest of period, it increased considerably. By the way Spain and France were the most popular lands visited by UK inhabitants.
Looking at details, in 1979 the number of travellers in and out was 10 and approximately 12 millions respectively. And up to 1986, both line showed nearly the similar growth rates. However, then the quantity of UK residents travelling abroad went up substantially, with increasing from 20 to 52 millions, whereas the number of visitors to the UK by overseas residents showed a gradual rise, with climbing from about 13 to 27 millions.
In addition, Spain and France were the most well-known countries visited by British people in 1999, with 9 and 11 millions of UK visitors respectively. Other countries: USA, Greece and Turkey were not so famous as former countries since latters were around 2-4 millions of UK residents.
- The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 79
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999,and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999. 84
- The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general tickets sales for different types of films in the USA in 2010. 84
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '11 million'.
Suggestion: 11 million
...d by British people in 1999, with 9 and 11 millions of UK visitors respectively. Other countri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then, well, whereas, as for, in addition, in general, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91370558376 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85163551179 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5370453773 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.23603664747 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353782896173 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134723494972 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661328241296 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190368968836 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177753892274 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.