The pictures below illustrate recent urbanization of Kimsville city.
By and large, it is clear that town has undergone noticeable transformation, with far less trees but more buildings.
Looking at maps, in 2002 there were lots of trees around Kimsville, however, we can see that in the current view the trees located in north-west and southwest have been cut down to make way for new apartments and football stadium respectively. In contrast, trees in the opposite side remain constant.
Regarding the changes which have taken place around city center, it is obvious that town become more modern now. In 2002, in south of center there was old cinema which has been converted into pub today. Also the factory in the east of center has been knocked down to build software company. The one of the places remains the same in the town is shopping centre in opposite of pub. Lastly, one recent change has been the construction of new train station in the west of Kimsville center.
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999,and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999. 84
- The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 79
- The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general tickets sales for different types of films in the USA in 2010. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...one noticeable transformation, with far less trees but more buildings. Looking at m...
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... In contrast, trees in the opposite side remain constant. Regarding the changes...
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...aken place around city center, it is obvious that town become more modern no...
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...hich has been converted into pub today. Also the factory in the east of center has b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, lastly, look, regarding, so, in contrast, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86826347305 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57033443294 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3653099059 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100957266422 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411692442983 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347852010034 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062199046552 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271661965481 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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