Making cocoa products

Essay topics:

Making cocoa products

The provided figure illustrates the process of making two products related to cocoa.

There are two big common stages in the process of turning the raw cocoa into cocoa liquid. From this point, each cocoa product has the last stage consisting of a different making process with many small steps.

In the first stage, the fresh cocoa is harvested and podded to keep the cocoa bean which is then fermented and dried. The next stage consists of four following steps with cocoa bean cleaned to remove the dust, winnowed to take out foreign objects or the small beans which are unqualified, roasted at a proper temperature and milled into cocoa liquid.

One part of this liquid is pressed into liquid butter and another one is combined with alkalizing to make cocoa cake. At the finall stage, two products from cocoa experience various steps to accomplish its own process. For solid butter, liquid butter is used to for filtering and then tempering process. And in order to make the end other product: cocoa powder, the process ends with cocoa cake broken, pulverised, cooled and packaged.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29528056116 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9127740054 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449481427968 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224125791945 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133585232036 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333457607158 0.15604864568 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101439829045 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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