Adults rate in using Internet

Essay topics:

Adults rate in using Internet

The given chart indicates the mature people’s proportion in Internet usage in the Great Britain with six various age stages between 2003 and 2006.

It is clear that that the younger British people were, the more adults used the Internet. Additionally, the percentage of adults in most of age groups spending their time on the Internet were always lowest in 2003.

In 15-25 stage, the adults rate in using Internet experienced a little rise from around 4,3% in 2003 to about 4,4% in 2004 and peaked in 2005, at 4,5%, before falling back to the 2005 rate in the last year. There was approximately 4,2% of British adults in 25-35 age group ultilizing Internet in 2003, and this figure went up slightly to roughly 4,3% and still remained that same proportion during three following years.

The proportion of adults in 35-45, 45-55 and 55-65 group using Internet witnessed a consistent increase during four years and reached it’s own peak by the year 2006 at about 3,8%; 2,7% and 1,8% respectively. Especially, 65 and over British did not use the Internet in 2003. Meanwhile, this figure for three other years just stood at nearly half of 1%.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91326530612 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48474625935 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637755102041 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.528705564 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.375 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394421429278 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179757192878 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117243585054 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231349470449 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109243441947 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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