The map below
The map displays the layout of a potential future town.
Overall, the industrial zones are expected to be located on the city's outskirts and along the Ring Road. It is worth noting that the rest of the plan is within the Ring Road
The industrial zones are expected to be situated on the city's outskirts and along the Ring Road. It is important to mention that the remaining areas of the plan are within the Ring Road.
In more specific terms, on the left-hand side of the plan, the housing area is planned to occupy one-fourth of the land to the west. Furthermore, the entertainment zones are predicted to be scattered from the north to the south of the plan, positioned near the road. Additionally, around half of the industrial area on the left is planned to be located outside of Rip Road, while the other half is intended to be situated inside.
In contrast, the industrial sector is proposed to be located away from the Ring Road and nearly double in size compared to that on the left side. Interestingly, the number of entertainment areas on the left is equivalent to those on the right. Meanwhile, in the central areas of the proposed new town, there are plans for three parking areas and two bus stops to cater to the transportation needs of the residences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62389380531 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67794176057 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451327433628 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2855199776 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0218463371802 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175786078393 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052735823518 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351572156787 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703144313573 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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