The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010.
Altering in an American town is illustrated by the map from 1948 to 2010. Overall, there was a significant improvement that happened in North-American city and West-American city, while residential area in East-American town unchanged between 1948 and 2010.
North-American city experienced a change from houses, park, and factories area to airport, supermarket, and commercial buildings between 1948 and 2010. Then, local supermarket in West-American town was altered to commercial buildings. Petrol station was the only one of building which unchanged in East-American city.
Furthermore, while North-American and West-American city had many changes in its area, housing area in East-American town did not experience any altering in the area from 1948 to 2010. Yet a church in South-American city in 1948 was replaced by sports stadium building in 2010. A changing mostly happened in West-American city and North-American city from 1948 to 2010, and many buildings had replaced by commercial buildings.
- Task 2At present the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? 67
- At present the media affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative of positive development? 67
- Task 2At present the medisa affect people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development? 56
- The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010. 61
- At present the media affect people's lives significantly.What impact does this have on society?Is it a negative or positive development? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...h-American city in 1948 was replaced by sports stadium building in 2010. A changing mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6821192053 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52351489708 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0707882276 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38483634027 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219628431611 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11689915881 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317154122161 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958216738657 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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