The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The maps depict a considerable transformation of the town of Stormer from 1995 to the present time.
Overall , during this period, the town has undergone many changes and many new infrastructures like airport and apartments have been added. There has also been a decrease in the number of shops in the town and increase in the road network.
The farmland has been reduced significantly and is present in the southeast corner of the map. The current farmland is surrounded on the other three sides by apartments , shops and a house.
There is a school built above the three shops and also surrounded by another three shops with the reduction in the forest area on the left side of the road. One of the house in middle of the map and in immediate west to the road has been replaced by a shop.
The forest on the northeast corner has been reduced and replaced by the construction of the airport and an apartment. Moreover, the only house which is on adjacent side of the road in northwestern side of the map has been replaced b y an apartment with a parallel road running to its west and south side. The road in west side is extended by a lot and a lot of interconnected roads have been developed inside the town.
- The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 56
- The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 67
- The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 73
- Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs including tobacco 61
- The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
... from 1995 to the present time. Overall , during this period, the town has under...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ent time. Overall , during this period, the town has undergone many changes and ...
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Suggestion: ,
...d on the other three sides by apartments , shops and a house. There is a school ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...e the three shops and also surrounded by another three shops with the reduction i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51363636364 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69518850326 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6932652297 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687793603866 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354426638145 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354899456961 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508586972119 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377099805959 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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