The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the trade between Vietnam and US. Unit is measured in $ million.
Overall, it is evident that coffee is the most exported item from Vietnam whereas, aircraft parts constitute the majority of exports to Vietnam from the US.
Vietnam transports fruits and vegetables valued at $16 million, which comes second to coffee exports with a difference of $5 million. Moreover, seafood and rice exports come very close as both are valued at $4.4 and $4.3 million respectively. Garments constitute $2 million of the exports made to the US and the last place in exports by Vietnam is held by others at $2 million.
In US, the second most sent goods to Vietnam are other, which are valued at $35 million, falling short $37 million to aircraft parts. Machinery are $30.5 million worth exports and $16.5 million exports consists of fertiliser. Cotton constitutes $12 million worth of export whereas cars only make up $6 million worth of export and hence, is the least valued export to Vietnam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Vietnam and US . Unit is measured in $ million. Overall, it is evident that coffee ...
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... Transports fruits and vegetables valued at 16$ million, which comes second to co...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
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...sports fruits and vegetables valued at 16$ million, which comes second to coffee e...
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... to coffee exports with a difference of 5$ million. Moreover, seafood and rice exp...
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...y close as both are valued at 4.4 and 4.3 $ million respectively. Garments constitu...
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...ose as both are valued at 4.4 and 4.3 $ million respectively. Garments constitute 2 $ m...
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...llion respectively. Garments constitute 2 $ million of the exports made to the US a...
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...n respectively. Garments constitute 2 $ million of the exports made to the US and the l...
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...ond most sent goods to Vietnam are other ,which are valued at 35$ million, fallin...
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...o Vietnam are other ,which are valued at 35$ million, falling short 37 $ million ...
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...ion to aircraft parts. Machinery are 30.5$ million worth exports and 16.5$ million...
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... are 30.5$ million worth exports and 16.5$ million exports consists of fertiliser....
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...sists of fertiliser. Cotton constitutes 12$ million worth of export whereas cars on...
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...rth of export whereas cars only make up 6$ million worth of export and hence, is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97647058824 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53815938452 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9669616645 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178662235419 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995227037585 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761280024746 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145898013 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455297829068 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.