The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years.
Given is the map illustrating the alteration of a library during a five-year period.
Overall, it is evident that the library witnessed a significant transformation with more various bookshelves and space for students to study independently. In addition, the development of technology facilitated students’ state-of-the-art machines to entertain instead of traditional paper news.
Regarding the places where various books are displayed, children's books were emerged in place of fiction ones after five years; meanwhile, the library experienced a shrinkage of both history and self-help books, giving way to the fiction books and three other fields, including Economics, Kitchen, and Law. Another striking change was that although there was no alteration to the space for sitting, the number of tables decreased and was converted from single to bigger ones to create more learning space for groups.
In addition, there was an empty space in the proximity to Fiction bookshelf, it was then transformed into children's area. Furthermore, there was a shelf for newspapers and periodicals in the past, it was converted into Films and DVDs. Finally, while there was no transformation of the Librarian's Desk and stairs to the South of the library, computers were arranged between the stairs and the shelf for films and DVDs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... create more learning space for groups. In addition, there was an empty space in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48292682927 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0731552458 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.737835743 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.571428571 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110107596305 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637098013107 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959866499389 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101141514975 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112148483215 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.