The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps describe some planned changes of the center of the town called Islip.
It’s easy to see that the most considerable change of this area will be a construction of a ring road around the centre. Various developments with regard to shops and housing will follow with the appearance of the ring road.
As we can see it in the map Islip town centre now, the main road runs through its centre from west to east. In the future, it will be used for pedestrians only. Traffic will be diverted on to a dual carriageway that will form a ring around the town centre.
Currently, there are two rows of shops which go along either side of the main road. However, it appears that a row of shops along the north side of the new pedestrian street will be knocked down to give way for a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing area. The rest row of shops will stay unchanged, but the park will be reduced in size so that more new houses can be built for residents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36413043478 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27669394132 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3790062916 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173916142426 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852554422707 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110083738056 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141538198835 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116601549395 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.