The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the future plans for the development of the centre of Islip, a small town, as well as its current structure.
To begin with, the main road in the centre of the city is planned to be switched to a pedestrians-only track, while vehicles will be able to move around the city centre through the dual carriageway that is planned to encompass everything in the city centre. The shops in the north will be grouped together in a shopping centre with a totally new bus station on its west side as well as a new car park on its east side. Further to the east, there is going to be a new housing.
While the shops at the centre will be left unchanged, a new housing to their south will be added to the two already existing housings. The park will be markedly reduced in size in order to make room for the new housing that is planned to be on its west. The school in the south-west region will be barely changed, increasing its size by a tiny margin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ell as a new car park on its east side. Further to the east, there is going to be a new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3021978022 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46387374507 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9771242713 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162016264439 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937125472801 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107567959689 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168373950029 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123151086896 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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