The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times

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The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

Presented are the two illustrations depicting several significant changes which have taken place in Nelson city between the year 2000 and today.

Overall, the city has witnessed numerous radical changes with the most noticeable being the construction of new amenities and changes in transportation.

In the top left corner, a hall of residence which does not appear in 2000 was constructed. On the opposite, the trees have disappeared to make way for a new shopping centre. In addition, the train station is to the north-west of the city centre has demolished but there was a new train station was erected on the right-hand side of it. Besides, a train line appears between the university and the city centre.

In 2000, there was an old market on the left-hand side of the city centre; however, till now, it was cleared to make way for a new shop and a new covered market was opened on the opposite. As of now, a bike rental scheme emerges located in the centre of Nelson. The way for pedestrians only is directly opposite the city centre was knocked down and replaced by a new way for transport. A restaurant and bars and clubs were built in the bottom left corner and right corner respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77990430622 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73972645547 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540669856459 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9697318441 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123517583314 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547293101395 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536138057664 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100947096326 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049959920599 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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