the maps below show changes made in the sheldon area in recent years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two given maps illustrate the main changes made in Sheldon over the period of 20 years.
Overall, it can be seen that the most noticeable change was a modernized town center. Moreover, Sheldon has been modernized, with an expanded supermarket, Glass factory, bus station, old cinema, the addition of Sheldon City Car Park, bicycle lane and the replacement of a forest and entertainment area.
Regarding the North side of Sheldon, the Sheldon Picnic and Recreation Area has been transformed into Sheldon Residential Zone along with Gym and Sports Center has been the substitution for sheldon forest in the North-West. Additionally, the construction of Bicycle Lane, Sheldon Motorway and the appearance of Sheldon City Car Park in the South-East have been taken place in a modification process.
One significant change is that the Town Center has been redeveloped to City center in the middle of this map. To the South-West part of Sheldon, there were the Glass Factory, old cinema closed and Sheldon Train Station in 2000. Today, those have been erected to Sheldon Industrial Area, IMAX and 3D Cineplex and Intercity Train Station in turn. And last but not least, the supermarket and bus station have been modernized and are now a shopping center and food court complex area and tram service.
- Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below You should write at least 150 words Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task 15
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words Allow yourself 20 minutes for this 81
- Consumer goods have become the most important part of people s lives Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 67
- In some countries many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...anges made in Sheldon over the period of 20 years. Overall, it can be seen tha...
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... Sheldon City Car Park in the South-East have been taken place in a modification ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13615023474 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75948527381 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7908107114 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.555555556 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158008722782 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765248107272 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485537986181 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120708478951 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473933991008 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.