The diagrams illustrated the present condition of an industrial area called Norbiton and the future development plan of it.
Overall, the region is going to be reconstructed completely from an area full of factories into a living-friendly area with the upgrading of road systems and infrastructure.
Since all of the old factories will be replaced by houses, Norbition will witness the appearance of some necessary buildings such as a school, a medical centre, a playground, and shops in order to meet the living standards of the locals.
In terms of road systems, the big roundabout in the middle of the region would be added two new roads, one crossing the river, making use of the farmland and one opening to the west to help expand the living area. There would be a second roundabout next to the original one to the south, which could reduce the rate of car accidents and eliminate traffic jams.
- The chart below shows the percentage of population aged 65 and over in three countries in 1980 2000 and predicted percentage in 2030 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site 61
- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...road systems and infrastructure. Since all of the old factories will be replaced by house...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88104670031 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9027445402 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.8 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161212755649 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104890892491 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148683706262 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129053262814 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156943160417 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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