The maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The given geographical representations compare a small island before and after the development carried out for tourism purposes. The range of area is 100 metres which is clearly and coherent representation.
It can be seen that there have been a great development in island like accomodation, restaurant, reception and pier with boats and without affecting the natural enviroment like trees are not cutting after the development.
The pier is constructed with two boats in the south-east direction while the restaurant is constructed in the north direction. In addition to this, the accomodation are mostly constructed in west direction and swimming area is also available on beach. Moreover, the footpath has been constructed in the area of accomodation for walking as well as motor track has constructed for visiting places like restaurant and reception.
Overall, it is evident that, accomodation and other facilities for tourists were built and that a pier was constructed to permit exist to a island by boat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...pier was constructed to permit exist to a island by boat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39375 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21008542527 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0165176461 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172397224582 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757805626975 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436694827954 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994696080822 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223300196261 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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