The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The picture illustrates the development of Langley town within a forty-year period from between 1910 and 1950.
Overall, on the North of Sherman street the factory and wasteland was replaced by Sherman Mansions while on the South park was developed. Moreover, Flats had been contructed inplace of Townhouses next to Jordan Street.
In 1910, on the right and left hand side of the Jordan Street Townhouses was there for citizens. Where as, to the North of Sherman Street Factory was Factory and on the East of it there was Wasteland, Store and Laundry. Moreover, on the Southren side of Sherman Street there was wasteland and Cottages for Railway workers.
However, there was significant development was there in 1950. In the West ofJodan Street Flats had been developed and Townhouses was demolished. In addition, In the North of Sherman Street Factory had been replaced by Sherman Mansions where as Laundry had been shifted towards North in place of wasteland and Cafe was opened on that place. Albeit Store was completely removed. Furthermore, To the South of Sherman Street Sheran Park was opened with special play area for children. In additon, new stoes were opened on the East of park where few cottages were there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...reet Townhouses was there for citizens. Where as, to the North of Sherman Street Factory...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...y had been replaced by Sherman Mansions where as Laundry had been shifted towards North ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06403940887 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53156922254 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463054187192 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0908088943 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541266549849 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273073165035 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427395643671 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553989263287 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602966579271 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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