The maps show below show changes in the village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now

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The maps show below show changes in the village from agricultural village in 1995 to a tourist destination now.

The provided maps compare the changes of farmland rural area having turn into a place to attract domestic and foreign tourists.

As can be seen from the above maps, it is clearly that there is a significant change about accommodation, entertainment sports and eating and drinking, while barely has been there any modifications in traffic system.

It is noticeable that the housing in the west of the village are widen, whereas sport was demolished to make way for a chain of restaurants. Looking down the northeast of the countryside, fish market disappeared and was replaced by apartments.

Hotel becomes bigger and more convenient at the center of area. In addition, there are now a number of holiday homes and a car park located in here, which used to be a public park. However, the most prominent feature in the south-western of the farmland also witnessed a change into courses which including golf and tennis. The place for fishermen fishing by boats every morning no longer exists; instead, yatch was the first time introduced to tourists.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
... housing in the west of the village are widen, whereas sport was demolished to make w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05714285714 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8282193143 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4907396821 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935613868652 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321440580876 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028292976531 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519327782348 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123097654772 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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