The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 yea period from 1980 to 2005.
The maps illustrate the changes that had been made to Youngsville located in New Zealand throughout 25 years. The process started in the year 1980 and finished in 2005.
The city mostly underwent a massive reduction in the amount of tree. However, this gave a way to establish more factories and more beneficial facilities. Also, some of the old establishments were upgraded in these 25 years. This city is divided into two northern and southern parts by Alanah river.
Starting with the northern part of the city, the biggest change is the construction of the stadium in the north. After chopping down of some trees in the northwest, the recreational area has been upgraded by adding a golf field and allowing jet skies on the lake. In addition to these enhancements, two parking lots were added in north and southeast of the lake respectively. Furthermore, the residential area in the east had been demolished and gave its place to augmentation of the railroads.
Moving on to the southern area, all trees have been uprooted and been replaced by factories and warehouses. Also, in the southeast, all of the private houses were knocked down and tall skyscrapers were erected instead. At last, the city added a marina in the eastern part of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he year 1980 and finished in 2005. The city mostly underwent a massive reducti...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s and more beneficial facilities. Also, some of the old establishments were upgraded in the...
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Line 13, column 133, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...and warehouses. Also, in the southeast, all of the private houses were knocked down and ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80645710731 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570754716981 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.736938967 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110728947244 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403854800039 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07606818461 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922797010322 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128638900671 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.