The monthly price of exported rice from Thailand and Vietnam from 2012 to 2015 (Million dollars per tons). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
Given are the line graph depicting the price of rice exported , during a period of 3 years, connecting from 2012 to 2015.Perceptibly, the cost of exported rice in Thailand show a superior value to Vietnam. Furthermore, the rice payment had by far the highest figure in 2012.
In January , the price of exported rice from Thailand was $350 million per ton. In the next month, it surged vaguely before plunged considerablely to $330 in March and maintained this price for the remaining months. In 2013, rice prices started at a slightly lower figure, around $300 then increased slightly in February before receded drastically to $170 in April and this price remained stable until the end of the year. 2014 and 2015 recorded a similar trend in the values of rice, with both years ending at around $80 million per ton.
In 2012, the rice's value per ton in Vietnam started at $150 million, which fluctuated throughout the year. In 2013, Vietnam recorded a moderately fluntuaction in the cost of rice, ending the period at around $110 million per ton.In the next two years, rice prices will remain stable with year-end prices of $100,000 and $50,000, respectively.
- The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009 The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed this price for the remaining months. In 2013, rice prices started at a slightly...
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...the period at around 10 million per ton.In the next two years, rice prices will re...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the period at around 10 million per ton.In the next two years, rice prices will re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83163265306 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69574462397 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3115286629 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.375 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310624174127 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161567881752 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935928764598 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228376933303 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105725710109 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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