Nowadays, cctvs camera put on place .some people believe that they infringe upon privacy of the people and other say they are beneficial of the citizens.
Nowadays, cctvs cameras are putt on every places. It recorded all moments. It is used on every public places. Some masses think that they infringe upon the privacy of the people and other people think that they are for the beneficial of the citizens. My essay will shed a light on given this statement in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the close circuit televisions are drmatically being used to on public places. It is used for on many places like a hotels, temples and gardens and on so many other places. Many people think that it is good , while other think that when they infringe upon the privacy of the people, because cctvs cameras capture there all moments of the human beings. Sometimes many happenings are occurred in that some places that time it is very useful for hunan beings. They can all the footages of the camera. It is very useful for police officers when they do not know who are theif. They can easily catch the theif with the help of cctvs camera. In which places cctvs cameras are available thief are not stole there anything.
On the other hand, it is not good, because many moments are personal in humans life which they cannot show their in front of other persons. But cctvs cameras capture there all moments. So that's why people cannot sit there alone or with any other persons. Sone people misuse it. They capture bad videoes.sometime people put there bad videos on the internet.
In summary, after discussing all points, the cameras are good but it depend on humans beings in which way they can use it.
- Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means others believe that these games are contributing to children development. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss and include your own opinion. 73
- To recent year, there is an on going debate. Whether by completing further study in universities or by joining workload directly. My essay will shed a light on both views in upcoming paragraphs. 11
- Nowadays, cctvs camera put on place .some people believe that they infringe upon privacy of the people and other say they are beneficial of the citizens. 67
- The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in percentage. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hotel' or simply 'hotels'?
Suggestion: a hotel; hotels
...ces. It is used for on many places like a hotels, temples and gardens and on so many oth...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...laces. Many people think that it is good , while other think that when they infrin...
^^
Line 2, column 575, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...r police officers when they do not know who are theif. They can easily catch the theif ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 711, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stolen'.
Suggestion: stolen
...tvs cameras are available thief are not stole there anything. On the other hand, it...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...humans life which they cannot show their in front of other persons. But cctvs cam...
^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...s cameras capture there all moments. So thats why people cannot sit there alone or wi...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...all points, the cameras are good but it depend on humans beings in which way they can ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: HUMANS_BEINGS[2]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human beings'?
Suggestion: human beings
..., the cameras are good but it depend on humans beings in which way they can use it.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65567765568 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21866894216 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3794681915 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8947368421 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434387904365 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125923957461 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12260921881 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262675579593 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112510950715 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.