NUMBER OF CARS MANUFACTURED 2020 2035

Essay topics:

NUMBER OF CARS MANUFACTURED, 2020-2035.

The line graph illustrates the quantity of car produced in 4 different
nations, namely - Japan, The US, China and The UK over a 15-year
period from 2020 to 2035.
According to the data given by the graph, only China will witness a considerable increase in the
manufacture of cars while the figures for Japan, The US and The UK are
anticipated to decrease dramatically during the given period.
Initially, in 2020, the number of cars made in The USA is forecasted to
be at 300, right below the production of cars in Japan which is likely to
start at the highest point around 350. In the year 2025, it is predicted that
there will be a slight rise to nearly 400 in the quantity of cars
manufactured in Japan and then experience a remarkable drop to 100
cars in 2035. Meanwhile, The USA will have seen a significant decline
to only 100 cars by 2030 before falling to under 50 cars in the final year.
Regarding the manufacture of cars in The UK and China, they will both
witness a noticeable fluctuation during the period between 2020 and
2035. However, the production of cars in The UK is forecasted to
experience a gradual alteration, which will decrease to just 100 cars in
2030 and then continue dropping to around 50 cars in the last year, while
the figure for China will have seen a rapid rise to approximately 150 cars
by 2030 before reaching a peak numbering 200 cars in total, becoming the largest car producers.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67578125 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66569625083 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48828125 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0381905459 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 3.83414634146 522% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325103893501 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167898354257 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607928160006 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108263662439 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966397188202 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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