passenger activity of Toronto Metro System, from Monday-Friday, July 2017

Essay topics:

passenger activity of Toronto Metro System, from Monday-Friday, July 2017

The graph depicts the number of people who use Toronto Metro System on weekdays during a month from 6 am to 10 pm. overall passenger of Toronto Metro System experienced a fluctuation during the time frame.

As it is illustrated, at 6 am the number of fares enjoyed a significant increased and it reached the highest number of travelers among the other times at 8 am, accounting for 400 thousand people. the next time, between 8 am and 10 am Toronto Metro System 's passengers saw a dramatic decline about just under 200 thousand people. Furthermore, the number of Toronto Metro System 's fares recovered abrubtly arround 300 thousand people and this number remained until 2 pm.

It is clear from the data that at 2 pm the figure for Toronto Metro System 's travelers dropped sharply and hit the low number of travelers. However, after that decreasement, the passengers experienced marked rised. afterwards the number of Toronto Metro System 's fares saw an decreasement, amounting to 150 thousand people. moreover, at the last 3 hours there were fluctuation of the number of Toronto Metro System ' travelers.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'depicts'.
Suggestion: depicts
The graph depict the number of people who use Toronto Me...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...a fluctuation during the time frame. as it is illustrated, at 6 am the number o...
^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...am, accounting for 400 thousand people. the next time, between 8 am and 10 am Toron...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...and this number remained until 2 pm. it is clear from the data that at 2 pm the...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Afterwards
...he passengers experienced marked rised. afterwards the number of Toronto Metro System s fa...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ber of Toronto Metro System s fares saw an decreasement, amounting to 150 thousand...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ment, amounting to 150 thousand people. moreover, at the last 3 hours there were fluctua...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on of the number of Toronto Metro System travelers.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92513368984 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83542503082 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3466640011 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263625359213 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144685606364 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700132115143 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22192890861 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067517043317 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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