The picture below shows how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates the process by which tomato sauce is produced. In general, there are altogether 15 steps that cover from planting tomatoes to serving ketchup at home.
The first step is that tomatoes are plucked and put into baskets by farmers. After being differentiated into good and bad ones, they are loaded onto the lorries and transported to the factory for manufacturing. In the factory, once the unnecessary parts of tomatoes such as stalk, seeds, and skin are extracted, tomatoes are placed in the containers and pressed to liquefy. At this point, sugar, vinegar, and salt are added for delicious flavor. And then, the containers are heated after which they are left for around two hours to cool down.
In the packaging stage, tomato ketchup is poured into bottles which are labeled afterward. The next step is that each bottle undergoes quality control to ensure the required standard. After all, the bottles are packed into boxes and delivered to supermarkets where customers can buy and serve the ketchup as a condiment with some food at home. Take hamburgers and french fries as examples.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...burgers and french fries as examples.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, after all, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57908924298 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6041134219 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941916963995 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363621975155 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370009109545 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704442164882 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226473412515 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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