The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The process illustrates how to make clothes from plastic bottles which are recycled.
In general, what stands out from the pictures is there are a total of 13 stages in the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles, beginning with cleaned bottles and culminating in the production of clothes.
The first stage commences with cleaning bottles before loading onto the trucks. After that, bottles are transferred to factories which will be made in the next stages. After being sorted, bottles are cut by machines which are professional in cutting.The next stage involves washing before being dried in the sun during 10 hours before starting the next stage.
The eighth stage continues with boiling in the machines. Subsequently, bottles were strained before being yarned. Next to this step, the production which is produced from the previous stage is weaved. The final stage is that the production of clothes was produced after rolling to the colors which the customers want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...ds out from the pictures is there are a total of 13 stages in the process of making c...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...hines which are professional in cutting.The next stage involves washing before bein...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
... is produced from the previous stage is weaved. The final stage is that the production...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25157232704 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5232748296 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0212080323 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180565287454 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887306026878 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113872454248 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171832673253 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128907390019 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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