The pictures describe an island named Paradise island in the past and in the present
The two illustrations depict a layout of a site called Paradise Island in the past and another version at the moment
Overall, initially, the site was relatively primitive, however, with many renovations, additions and removals, it was converted into a more tourist-oriented area
In the past, the area was largely covered with palm trees, natural land and a scientific research station located on the left of the center of the map. All of them were then demolished to make way for a new hotel complex with a swimming pool adjacent to it, joined with an open restaurant and a BBQ area by a new path at the moment. Also, a natural spring which was situated to the east of the island still has remained unchanged with a new café added behind at the time being
Moreover, rocks found in the northeast coastline have also stayed intact till the present day, which is situated on the right-hand side of a newly-constructed scenic lookout. People now can also go swimming at a beach situated in the northwest of the map. Finally, to the southwest there located a pier which was converted into a T-shaped one and alongside a cruise ship which was initially a boat. A new cycle path was also added to give access to all amenities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68518518519 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78326618287 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.644889335 43.030603864 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099642968049 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368345276063 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446149098294 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761079409641 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082555195743 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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