the pictures show the improvement that has been done to the city from 2015 till present,describe the pictures and sum it into some paragraphs
The maps illustrate the changed that has been done to the city in the period of 1995 until 24 years after.
Overall, there are some improvement that has been taken to the city over the period. The farmland has been converted into a golf park and the forest has been removed in the near of the farmland.
Initially, the housing areas in the city just focused at the north west of the city. However, it expands nowadays till the west of the city, and the fish market buildings has been converted into some apartments for the tourism. Consequently, the fishing port which has been used for the fisher in the near of the fish market has been removed. And the café at south has remained the same.
New housing area has been built at the west to fix the demand, and the farmland at the north east has been reconstructed to build a golf field. Tennis area has been added at the south of the golf replaced the forest area. The hotel at the south east erected a car park for the customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3825136612 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20978633878 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469945355191 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2008278032 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166996484368 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075180628308 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615807959121 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118952390944 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539421244304 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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