The pie chart below shows information about world water resources and the bar chart shows the utilization of water in Egypt Saudi Arabia and Canada

Essay topics:

The pie chart below shows information about world water resources, and the bar chart shows the utilization of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada.

Given are two graphs concerning the word water resources issue. While the former pie chart reveals the distribution of water and freshwater the latter table indicates the figure of the water usage in three distinct nations namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada.

In terms of the pie chart, it is noteworthy that an overwhelming majority of the resources belong to salt water with precisely 97%. At odds with this, fresh water constitutes a negligible minority of 3%. Interestingly, with regard to the freshwater, it is made up of three diverging components. The water ice and glaciers that are included in the fresh water take up the most remarkable proportion with accurately 79%, leaving the remaining shares at 20% and 10% for ground and surface water respectively.

Regarding the bar chart, the homogenous picture was witnessed in both Egypt and Saudi Arabia. Both classifications topped the list in the percentage of agriculture at roughly 80%, followed by domestic water with well over 10%. Meanwhile, the utilization of water in industry made up by the least significant number with around 10% in both countries. On the contrary, in Canada, while industry is water-intensive with merely 80%, the figure of agriculture and domestic are in the 10’s.

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, while, on the contrary, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20098039216 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96076402408 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.508601355 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314454766506 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130017344242 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862241450904 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232541694342 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645244669162 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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