Pie chart education levels

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Pie chart: education levels

The pie charts compare the maximum level at school achieved by women in someland in 1945 and in 1995.

Generally, it can be clearly seen that women received a much higher level of education in someland in 1995 than they did in 1945 because on the latter the top level for over three quarters of women was not beyond the Year 6. In contrast to the 1% of women who accomplish Fist Degree in 1945, the majority of women in 1955, amounting to 70%, had got a first degree or a Post Graduate.

In terms of the education in 1945, there were the same proportion of no schooling women and women who completed just the 3rd year (35% in each). The total number of women who completed the 12th year was much greater than the ones who went on with a first degree, with 64% and 1%, respectively. Turning to 1995, the situation changed radically due to the fact that all women completed at least the 9th year of school, 10% just finished the 9th year and 30% finished the 12th year. Half of the women had graduated from an initial degree and 20% had gone on to postgraduate studies.

Overall, we can see that there have been huge development in the education levels completed by women in someland over the 50 years

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, at least, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42152466368 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33639602925 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542600896861 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0734484657 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160963222955 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833527880089 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101963963712 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144790056023 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982837996887 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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