Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Tourists tend to visit historical locations when they come to a new country. However, record shown that these attraction drawn to foreigners more than local people. In this essay, I will prompt some reasons of this case and give solutions to tackle this problems.
There are serveral reason why tourists, instead of local people, go to the museums and historical places. Firstly, these places store most of the countries's evidents from war to culture, which provides comprehensive overview for people. Although this is strange for foreigners, these evidents close to local people's life, when most of them always study about their country history and go these place serveral times in their life. For example, War Remnants Museum always draw to tourists because this place prompt the historical relics about the war between Vietnamese and American, which is so strange for foreigners but become familiar with Vietnamese people. Secondly, most of the historical locations are likely to unchanged day by day, which makes local people feel bored when they go to many times while foreigners feel excited because the time they go to these place might be their first time.
Serveral measurements could be prompted to attract local attendance are change the perception of people. Gorvenment and organizations should held more historical and civic events at these places to promote through social media to raise awareness and encourage people's attendance. Another solution is these historical places would collaborate schools, collegues, universities to held tours for students. Besides, these places would be rebuilt in order to attract more young people.
In conclusion, there are two main reasons why historical places draw to more foreigners than local people. These issues can be tackled by holding more events at these place, collaborating schools to have tour guides for students and rebuilding some old historical places to attract more young adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39869281046 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60621273588 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1532217746 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4397583924 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158689339276 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582252229756 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278378670783 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032396407997 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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