The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
The pie charts represent the households spending on six different goods and services (housing, food, health care, education, transportation and other) in a percentage between 1950 and 2010.
Overall, the household expenditure was mainly spent on housings in 1950 but this has changed by 2010 where the household spent on variety of goods and services (foods, housing, others and transportation).
In 1950, the households spent the most money on housing which recorded of 72.1%, followed by food factors which had 11.2% of household expenditures and the education indicated the third largest portion of household expenditures had used of 6.6% of money. Meanwhile, there was a minimal proportion of household money spent on the rest of goods and services of below 5% in the same year.
By 2010, the household expenditures spent on various goods and services. A 34% of household expenditures had used to purchase food whereas housing spending decreased to 22%. Other and transportation had the third largest share of the household expenditures of 19.2% and 14% respectively in 2010. Concurrently, there was a similar proportion of household expenses had consumed for education and health care.
- Some people believe that the government should make education for the elderly for free. Others think that older people should pay for their own education. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this proposal. 73
- The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. 61
- It is generally discussed among the public that extreme sports such as sky diving and rock-climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The graph below shows the unemployment rates in two European countries since 2000 and predicted unemployment rates until 2020. 73
- The table below shows the results of a survey on workplace complaints in Germany in 2001. 67
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'third', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.311627906977 0.268076937826 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.125581395349 0.116061578633 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0511627906977 0.0759168565197 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0232558139535 0.0366838410393 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.144186046512 0.155750635184 93% => OK
Participles: 0.046511627907 0.0379272487307 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06388646474 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0093023255814 0.0210936926555 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837209302326 0.0948980150116 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0139534883721 0.00967000014798 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1191.0 1161.00487805 103% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36898395722 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368983957219 0.337110787985 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326203208556 0.247514529752 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.256684491979 0.171178102325 150% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181818181818 0.112407865282 162% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06388646474 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.546246751206 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.7365073373 49.3433353143 85% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.375 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0393230587 42.9750493124 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.875 135.714022679 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 55.9953208556 47.7609492067 117% => OK
Elegance: 3.375 2.94281807926 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414540470972 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.230796887884 0.181151798455 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106022315122 0.0850326197045 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.741448756659 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203874335856 0.157042692854 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238178564486 0.228904883108 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109094302706 0.108899403657 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44740707494 0.367819155151 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101505960543 0.0812612215331 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313414397338 0.316326947829 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297975029948 0.0921553760075 32% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.