The pie chart below illustrates the average money spent by Japanese and Malaysian on six different categories in the year 2010.
Overall, although there were some differences between the expenditures of people in Japan and Malaysia, the amount of money spent on health care in these two nations was obviously lower than other categories.
Looking at the detail, in Japan, other goods and services was the sector which households spent highest amount of money on with 29%. However, in Malaysia, people trend to using a significant amount of money for housing (34%).The expenditures of feeding in Japan and Malaysia was the second most noticeable sector which accounted for 24% and 27% respectively.
In comparison, while the amount of money spent by Japanese on transporting accounted for one fifth in total, the money used by the Malaysian for this category was less than two times. The expenditures of health caring purpose in Japan was accounting 3% in 2010. In Malaysia, the money paid for this category was more than 3% compared with Japan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The pie chart below illustrates the average money spe...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
...ervices was the sector which households spent highest amount of money on with 29%. However, i...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ificant amount of money for housing 34%.The expenditures of feeding in Japan and Ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71476144288 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9996220697 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156902513994 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936272732077 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587614223911 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116932839869 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572920121991 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.