The pie charts below illustrates the amount of water consumed for three different targets in North and South America, Europe, South East Asia, Central Asia and Africa.
Overall, unlike four others, Europe and North America were the two areas where water wasn't used mainly for agriculture. Except South America, other surveyed regions didn't utilized large amount of water for domestic purpose.
Looking at the detail, in North America, 48% water used served for the demand of industries, the next largest section which accounted 39% of water consumed is agriculture. However, more than half of this resource utilized in South America was provided to planting purpose and just on-ten of the water was used for developing industries. In Europe, the percentages of water consumed for domestic use and agricultural use accounted 15% and 32% respectively.
More specifically, in Asia considerable proportions of water was utilized for agricultural demand (88% in the Central, 81% in the South East). The amount of water consumed for industrial use in South East Asia was more than two times that used for this purpose in Central Asia (12% and 5% respectively). However, these regions used similar percentages of this resource for domestic demand. In Africa, water was utilized mainly for developing agriculture (84%) and the proportions of this resource used for domestic purpose and industrial target were 9% and 7% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34666666667 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7749994995 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457777777778 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8902897364 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234555189487 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119932868998 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041117101246 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161486095026 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102221780789 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.