Some people think that the foreigners, who migrate to other countries should live as same as the local people in these new countries. From my point of view, I am not completely oppose this idea but I am sure that forcing people to conduct it is very difficult.
In some extent, I believe that following the culture in the new countries, which the foreigners chose to live in is very essential. The first reason is people should not make themselves to different with others in their society. Because of this unusual they might be complained about their lifestyle by other local people or they may have difficulty adapting and making friends. The second important reason is learning the customs and traditions of the new living places can help people to avoid breaking the law of these nations. For instance, in America, people can easily buy, own and use guns legally, however, when the Americans move to Vietnam, all of their rights which relate to guns are banned. Lastly, trying new customs may contribute a significant part of expanding people' knowledge.
On the other hand, I can generally understand that people always want to keep their own traditions so following other cultures or other lifestyles is too complex for them. For foreigners, specially the elders living in the new society with new customs is very difficult. There are a lot of habits they can not change and they always keep their old attitudes so forcing them to live in the new way will make them unhappy and bring them to uncomfortable situations. In addition, people in the world all have their own nations, which they very proud of, they might not want to replace anythings even when they are living abroad because their cultures identify them with others and keeping these traditions is the way people show their love with their country. Furthermore, there are many foreigners who go to other countries to advertise their nation's culture so changing the lifestyles is very unnecessary for them.
In conclusion, I am not completely support or oppose the belief that people should follow the new customs and traditions when they move to new countries because I think that changing mind to adapt to other society is as important as keeping your own lifestyle to identify who you are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other society is as important as keeping your own lifestyle to identify who you a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9012987013 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55557753862 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451948051948 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7508859127 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.785714286 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294234554498 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123799738234 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721215298834 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218667466015 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502257009097 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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