The pie charts below show the coffee production coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.

The comparison in production and consumption of coffee in addition to the profit distribution in the whole world is displayed by three pie charts, shown in percentage.

Overall, European population are the greatest coffee consumer, while South Africa is the most well-known producer of this beverage. Furthermore, the most profitable sector is observed on delivery.

As per data, there are slightly more than two fifths of people in Europe consuming coffee, being the highest, followed by American at over a third. However, the figure for Japanese and the rest of the world is below a fifth. When it comes to the production, South Africa has the biggest rate at over two in five, while Indonesia is the most second famous of coffee producer at more than one in five, then Japan and Vietnam are under the latter's rate.

Turning to the distributed income, delivery businesses break a record as the largest profit in approximately a half. Additionally, retailers obtain around a half of the former, and producers make up to reach a fifth of profit. Lastly, exporters accounts for only one in ten, being the least gaining among the other figures.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, third, well, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03141361257 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74940404616 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6428510659 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252128443802 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095589646786 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111853121941 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164104055695 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134210787769 0.0819641961636 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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