The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence from 2012 to 2016

Essay topics:

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence from 2012 to 2016.

The change in three various businesses in Great Britain with a presence of social media between 2012 and 2016 is displayed in the bar chart, shown in percentage.
Overall, the highest proportion was on large businesses. Meanwhile, the tiny those experienced an upward trend, and two others also increased with some changes.
Initially, there were more than three fifths of large businesses having social media presence, being the biggest. When it came to the medium and small ones, these figures had a percentage in about a third of the former. Furthermore, the aforementioned three figures tended to incline, with several fluctuations.
Eventually, the rate of the large businesses witnessed a slight growth to almost reach four in ten, remaining the largest, while there was an observation which that of the medium ones grew dramatically to exceed a half. Even though the rest showed an uplift trend, its proportion accounted for below two quarters, being the minimum data recorded.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80673189872 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677215189873 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0889086441 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191496775791 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718915968224 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110392866118 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121258982353 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135085176096 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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