The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

Essay topics:

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of online retail shopping sales in 4 categories: travel, films, and music, books, clothes in New Zealand during the 10 years period from 2003 to 2013.

To put it in a nutshell, the most significant proportion belongs to travel and film or music in 2013.

What can be inferred from the first pie chart is that as regards 2003, sales or travel preponderated with over one third. Coming in the next ranks were clothes (24%) and film and music (21%). Lastly, books only occupied just under a fifth. What is worth mentioning the two years is that there was a huge escalation of 14% in the trade of film and music. Additionally, it is obvious that the amount of travel and clothes sold on the Internet decline by 7% and 8%, respectively.

Turning to the year of 2013, it can be seen from the second chart that film and music items were in the majority with 33%. This was followed by travel and books, with respective percentages being 29% and 22%. Lastly, clothes saw a strong decrease to 16%.

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Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, so, third, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58918918919 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47161238602 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3879209432 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185344811998 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640750566245 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110583112763 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133534165143 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132234984119 0.0819641961636 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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