The pie charts illustrate the online retail products sold in Canada through the year 2005 and 2010 in percentage terms.
Overall, in these two surveyed years, electronic and appliance sectors was always the top important products of online shopping sales. However, the amount of online video games sold have increased as a potential products through the period of five years.
Looking at the details, in 2005, the most noticeable retail sectors sold online was electronic and appliance goods which accounted for more than a third of online shopping sales products. The second famous sector was the amounts of home furniture, however, it still less than the percentages of electronic devices 10%. In the next five years, the proportions of furnishings goods sold online decreased to 15% and these amount of electronic and appliance products was no longer the most popular online shopping sectors with 30%.
More specifically, food and beverages was the most well-known online products in 2010 which accounted for 32% of the top four online shopping sectors, more than it had used to five years ago 10%. In 2005, the proportions of video games sold at online shops had reached just under 20%. In 2010, these percentages rose marginally to 23% and became the third popular sector of top important products of online shopping sales.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...ames sold have increased as a potential products through the period of five years. Lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, so, still, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16589861751 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55027388257 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47465437788 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3376809129 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.555555556 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217631346408 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111558098855 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655252777169 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161541655614 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521324500454 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.