The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.
The pie chart illustrated the proportion of different resources which are used to produce electricity in Ireland and the table displays the main purposes of using electricity in that country.
Overall, the vast majority of electricity in Ireland is produced from coal and gas, while only a small percentage is generated from wind and solar. The main reasons to consume electricity is heating and lighting home, whilst kitchen appliances and other reasons only take a small proportion of this consumption.
A significant majority of electricity produced in Ireland comes from fossil fuels such as coal and gas, at 45% and 35% respectively, which is four times higher than the total electricity made from renewable resources such as wind and solar, which only comprise of 10% for each.
The largest electricity consumption in Ireland is warming the house, which is accounted for 55%, followed by lighting and kitchen appliances at 20% and 15% respectively. Consumer electronics and phone charging only use a small amount of electricity, at 5% for each category.
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- Topic: Some would say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...rces such as wind and solar, which only comprise of 10% for each. The largest electric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34117647059 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96543525108 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7017288352 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.333333333 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279328192065 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148958628432 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093143592552 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191689969475 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929920341668 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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