The pie graphs below show the results of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which girls participate.
The two pie charts illustrates the proportion of two different sexes children who are participated in cultural and leisure activities.
Overall, it can be manifested that boys were preferred more spend time in sports and games while computer games were the highest percentage, whereas girls are choose more indoor activities as especially dancing .
First of all,computer games had the most proportion of male with the figure of 34%, where half of it 16% participants for the female. But, there was no difference in listening music for both genders, both were similar proportion with 10%. While reading activities had a major outlook, it was the lowest for boys with only 2% and girls with ten-time more(21%).
Secondly, dancing was the activity had the highest numbers for the girls at 27%. Also, netball and gymnastics was preferred by females with 15% and 11% respectively. Although, 17% of boys play football in their cultural or leisure activity and only 11% of children did skateboarding. Furthermore, basketball was the play by boys with just over a 25% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computer
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'skateboard'
Suggestion: skateboard
...e activity and only 11% of children did skateboarding. Furthermore, basketball was the play b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21264367816 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90980047005 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9228423207 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 5.23603664747 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174462312317 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749002131616 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554155210478 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107875533819 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236938936438 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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