The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The given maps illustrate the features of the Grange public park in 1920 and that park's current stage.
Overall, the park's area did not change within this period. However, some facilities had been relocated and introduced. Moreover, some new facilities have been added to the park.
In 1920, a fountain had in the centre of the park and the music stage was located on the left side of the park. It was fully enclosed by a roof. Moreover, three half-circle rose gardens were along the border. Here, Arnold avenue and Eldon street were the main access roads, and these roads had one entrance per road. Plus, the seats were in along the boundary. And water plants' pond was in the northeast corner. Moreover, a rectangular glasshouse was located on the entrance right side along Eldon street.
At present, the park has a lot of modified facilities. Mainly, the closed stage is replaced by the amphitheatre, it is an open area, and bigger than the old one. The park entrance locations have not changed. Moreover, the fountain is replaced by the rose garden; it is square in shape. and along the square sides have seating facilities. Here, the cafe and children's play area are the new features, and they are constructed in the northeast corner. In addition, a pond is located on the southeast side.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parks'' or 'park's'?
Suggestion: parks'; park's
...at parks current stage. Overall, the parks area did not change within this period....
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: square
...n is replaced by the rose garden; it is square in shape. and along the square sides have seatin...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...the rose garden; it is square in shape. and along the square sides have seating fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47575939185 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540178571429 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9293913028 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8888888889 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4444444444 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.09268292683 415% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178124034013 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568783985218 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856329424346 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140666178088 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862790978136 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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