the population of Chile by age group between 1975 and 2035

Essay topics:

the population of Chile by age group between 1975 and 2035

The line graph shows the distribution of age groups in Chile’s population from 1975 to 2035.
Overall, it is clear that the age group between 15 and 64 years accounted for the consistent largest group among 2 other groups. The oldest group increased slightly and expected to swiftly grow up in 2035. In contrast, a downward trend was seen in the under 15 years group and projected to continually slump.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the oldest group almost doubled to 10 percent in 2015, then expected to continually grow up to approximately 15 percent at the end of the period. An upward pattern was seen with the 15-64 years group, it accounted for 70 percent of Chile’s population in 2015, which increase by almost 20 percent above its in 1975, before expected to plunge to 60 percent throughout the remain part of the period. Although there was an increase in their country’s population of the elders group and its incline to decrease in 2035, this group still stands out as the highest proportion in the Chile’s total population. Meanwhile, the under 15 years groups declined by over 20 percent in 2015, then projected to continue dropping to reach the similar point at nearly 20 percent as the 65 years and older group in 2035

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Average: 7.9 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cted to plunge to 60 percent throughout the remain part of the period. Although there was ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, still, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58026521797 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4374676835 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364473688948 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187061267404 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146899719835 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328503029758 0.15604864568 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145150209614 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cted to plunge to 60 percent throughout the remain part of the period. Although there was ...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, still, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58026521797 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4374676835 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364473688948 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187061267404 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146899719835 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328503029758 0.15604864568 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145150209614 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.