process
The flow-chart describes different stages of an igloo-making process.
As can be seen from the process, there are four big stages to be made in order to finish it, beginning from choosing hard-packed snow to cutting ventilation holes inside the wall/roof.
The first step involves building a basement, on a snow ground, hard-packed snow is determined. Next, these chosen snow is cut by snow saw, resulting in large blocks which are to make a basement. The blocks’ edges are then further smooth by snow saw again.
Second, from the round-shaped basement, snow are placed continuously on until reaching a suitable height.
The next step involves covering the Igloo, including an entrance created by digging a hole below the snow wall, together with the bigger block which is placed on the top of the Igloo as way to open it.
In the next step, igloo is finished while making further smooth, while the outside crevices is packed with further snow, the inside is carefully smoothed by hand. A door is built right upon the holes after that, followed by the covering of hole with snow blocks. At the end, you must cut ventilation holes inside the wall to finish it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to snow'
Suggestion: to snow
... snow is determined. Next, these chosen snow is cut by snow saw, resulting in large ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91959798995 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59898603612 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.78033775 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0729009529177 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377218831469 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794002812493 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628698052449 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944790777871 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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