The process of pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea
The diagram depicts the process of making the raw tea and ripe tea from the initial. It’s been shown through numerous episodes.
Both of them are taking six episodes to get done. There are three main stages for each, while after the third step, they will lead different paths in order to get produced.
The production of both starts with the plants are being fried in pans, followed by the rolling stage, then to be left under the sun to get dried. After the drying step, we find that the dried leaves are turned into loose raw tea. At this moment, we have two choices, either to let them get compressed, or to be fermented by mold. It depends on which kind of tea is processed.
In the first case, after the compression, the raw tea starts to get produced. Hence, we should leave it until it is being aged by storage, so finally, it is changed into the vintage pu-erh raw tea. In the second case, after the fermentation completion, it results in loose ripe tea that needs to be compressed, so the pu-erh ripe tea is made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, second, so, then, third, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44973544974 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24153862221 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5769448978 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421168366202 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160301427302 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174876038121 0.0843802449381 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254009511162 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197666059268 0.0819641961636 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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