proportion of population aged 65 and over in Japan, Sweden and USA
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in Japan, Sweden, and the USA between 1940 and 2040.
Overall, it is clear that the population in Japan was around 5% and declined its rate to 4% in 1960 and 1980 with some projections it will be around 10% in 20202 and will reach a pinnacle point of about 28% in 2040.
Sweden has the population around 8% in 1940 and it showed an upward trend till 1980 with 15% of the population and with some projections it will increase its rate around 20% in 2020 and will be the second highest proportion rate in 2040.
Moreover, the USA has the highest percentage of the population around 8% in 1940 with a slight increase in its rate around 10% in 1960 and 15% in 1980 but it will maintain the stability of around 15% till 2020 and will show an upward trend around 24% in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31875 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3349836054 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43125 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6023404786 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.75 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197909167693 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166105464374 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142042367617 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166105464374 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142042367617 0.0819641961636 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.72 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.37 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.