In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There are a lot of human kind thinks that society should gives them a distrination between people because they think society made by humans ;other think and believe that everyone must be talented by himself with out help from super Macy or society.this essay will discuss both of them.
Nowadays; society is very pivotal and important for every one live . company or Academy or university all public needs to be safety.the purpose of society is quite comprehensive it include all the aspects on the other hand; education is a crucial factor in the development of societies. schools should had ample examination and to improve the knowledge.people become more mature when it's available to be a teachers or instructions.above all;the super Macy of all countries must ensure to educate moreover; masses have to work Daily to earn money however; nowadays;masses also have to work together to communicate together.some people are doctors; lawyers some are police department people who provides us.
In Stark constrast; success is much more riches; power or fame .alot of people believe that we believe that we should follow our passion because that is where our heart and soul is.they think that we can do everything individual without any help.However; they should build confidence; study hard and cause human child begins the winning streak by challenging every failure and hence confidently .it will enable you to evaluate yourself on regular basis.Also ; they think if you put a little effort and saw the seeds of hard work and perserance .
To sum up; Its clear that everyone think with his right way . opinions are such a difference between other but everyone believes in his point of view.in my point of view everyone can do anything individual without help ; life is hard and Evey body should depend on his self and most vital thing it is sure to say that being able to feel content with your life and achieve always what you dreamed of .
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...e and achieve always what you dreamed of .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 324.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0462962963 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76882321607 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 283.868780488 184% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.975199126 43.030603864 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.571428571 112.824112599 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.2857142857 22.9334400587 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149107556869 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577702083871 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376429635019 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835825882102 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139940380441 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.2329268293 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.3012195122 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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