Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy Discuss both views and give your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ll have while he is in his first years, Its going to be a good memory that will aff...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Also
... and feelings for the rest of his life. also, pets can be a tool to relief your stre...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...u with a happy smile on his face that’s kind of a relaxing moment. Furthermore, This pets...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Pets
...ets can be dangerous and unhealthy too. pets can have some health issues for their o...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ir own family if the pet itself has any kind of a disease and that can leads of losing on...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... As an example, Their was a case in the news about a family died because of thei...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...about a family died because of their dog that he had a disease with out any one k...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...use of their dog that he had a disease with out any one knowing from the family and tha...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...to a healthy life. In my opinion it’s a must to have a pet because you are going to hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05050505051 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99576124643 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441077441077 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2588515304 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241987839633 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111932643545 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739821931283 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156573765337 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999960572492 0.056905535591 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 50.2224549098 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.8 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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