The relationship between age and crime, 2002.
Types of property crime in the UK, 2002.
The line graph reveals information on the percentage of crime rate among different ages while the pie chart illustrates the proportion of property crime in the UK by the year 2002. Unit are measured in percent (%).
It is clear from the line graph that the figure for people aged 20 appeared to be by far the largest one, with 80% which was followed by the corresponding figures of people aged 16 and those aged 24, with 70% and 60%, respectively. Nevertheless, the population aged 0 - 12 seemed to be an age group having the lowest rate of commiting crime, with just under 5%.
It is interesting to note that the figure for crime rate decreased gradually when people got older. In fact, the figure for people aged 28 was witnessed to be 20%, then it continued its downard trend to under 10% by the age of 60.
Turning to the pie chart, there was a significant difference in the proportion of property crime rate in 2002. Actually, the figure for violent crime made up the higest one among these crime, with 48% which was followed by that of property crime and drug crime, consituting 23% and 22%, in that order. By contrast, the figure for public order crime stood at the lowest level, with just 9%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this crime' or 'these crimes'?
Suggestion: this crime; these crimes
...lent crime made up the higest one among these crime, with 48% which was followed by that of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, nevertheless, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49628964628 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0388648096 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328085364797 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14790586301 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11325961446 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219743227802 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107602842098 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.